RAPUNZEL

Gothel was on her way back to the tower after shopping in the village. She was furious. Rapunzel, unaware of everything, greeted her as always with a big smile. But she soon realized that something was wrong. Her mother's face said it all.

 Gothel pulled a bracelet out of her bag: it was Rapunzel's bracelet. The girl turned pale. In fact, her mother strictly forbade her to leave the tower. Rapunzel thought it was for her own good, she had told her the world out there was dangerous and full of evil people. From what little she had seen it didn't seem that way, yet she firmly believed in her mother's good faith. Obviously she was wrong. What interested Gothel was the power of Rapunzel's hair. It kept her young even though she was actually nearly a hundred years old.

The witch was steamed up and was intent on teach her stepdaughter a hard lesson.

"You deeply disappointed me, Rapunzel" she said sternly, "maybe I didn't educate you well enough. You have no respect for the woman who raised you and who loves you".

"Sorry Mom, it won't happen again," Rapunzel promised, almost on the verge of tears.

"I no longer believe in your words. You deserve a punishment. Evidently you need the rough stuff." Gothel reached out to the girl and whispered something. Rapunzel's long hair instantly rose and enveloped her body. Then they began to crush it. A grimace of pain crossed Rapunzel's face.

 "Please, stop. It hurts!" Rapunzel said with difficulty.

"Suffering will help you understand your mistakes. Don't complain, it’s all your fault” her mother scolded.

Finally the grip ceased and Rapunzel fell to the ground. She began to cry hard.

"I'm going to make dinner," Gothel said.

 

*

 

Rapunzel was alone in the tower again. She was dealing with a jigsaw puzzle. It depicted a beautiful blue bird, like the one she had seen at the waterfall during one of her few secret outdoor adventures. Several pieces were still missing, but she was very pleased with how it was coming. She was framing a green piece when she heard her name scream. It was Flynn.

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"Go away! If my mother finds us out, she will kill me!" Rapunzel yelled at him.

"Don't worry, I followed her for a while. She must be headed for Grimmburg. She won't be back until four hours," the young rascal replied.

"It doesn't matter, I can't risk it," she replied. But thens he stared into the young man's large, passionate eyes. She had fallen in love withhim from the first timehe fell into her house, while running away from some crooks. Eventually she gave in and joined him in no time.

"I want to take you to a special place," he told her.

After half an hour of walking they arrived. It was a dream place. Rapunzel didn't believe there could be such beautiful places. In front of her was a magnificent lake with emerald green waters. From a gigantic ridge a waterfall fell, much higher and more vigorous than the one she had seen before. On the shores of the lake nature grew luxuriantly. Hundreds of mighty pines formed a forest that had to be exterminated, populated by countless and fantastic creatures. One of these, an elegant deer with strong horns, was drinking from the cool waters of the lake.

The two sat down on the lawn. "How come you're always barefoot?" Flynn asked. "Being in the tower all the time and never going out I don't need shoes," she replied. Then the boy grabbed Rapunzel's left foot and brought it close to his face. He sniffed it. It was scented. Then he started licking it. "What are you doing ?! You tickle me!" Rapunzel exclaimed, embarrassed. "I'm sorry, they are really beautiful." "I didn't think men liked feet," she said surprised. "Not everyone, but many do". "Well, continue if you want, it was pleasant." Flynn took that opportunity.

"Look, of course you are free to refuse, but ... do you want to?" the boy asked. His face was red. "Do what?" asked the naive Rapunzel. Somehow Flynn expected that reaction, besides, she didn't know anything about the world. "Don't worry, trust me." 

 

He took off her dress and pulled off her panties. He did the same with his pants. Rapunzel didn't quite understand what was going on, but she felt strangely excited. It was a feeling she had never experienced before. She felt Flynn's warm penis penetrate her vagina. Flynn grabbed her buttocks and began to push. Then again. And again, until they both came. It was magnificent. Shortly after, the two fell asleep.

Waking up was like going from a dream to a nightmare. The sun was setting. It meant that they had slept for hours, Rapunzel’s mother had certainly already returned to the tower. She was terrified. Flynn tried to comfort her, offered her to run away together. The proposal was tempting, but Rapunzel couldn't cheat on her mother. She was willing to confront her anger and accept the consequences.

When she got back. Grethel didn't utter a word, she walked the walk. She gave her a slap that threw her against the wardrobe. Then she began to torture her using black magic. From the hands of the witch, lightning bolts of a reddish-violet color shot towards the helpless body of poor Rapunzel. 

Her daughter was screaming in excruciating pain. But despite everything, she deserved it, Rapunzel thought.

"I hope now felt the lesson" Grethel said coldly "Now go to the kitchen and prepare some food. Make yourself useful." Rapunzel obeyed.

 

*

 

In the following days, the relationship between Rapunzel and her mother remained very cold. Even during lunches and dinners, silence reigned. Rapunzel, in fact, refused to have a look at her mother: she never raised her head above her plate. Things changed out of the blue on a Monday night like any other. Grethel returns to the tower with a beaming expression. Her right hand was holding a wicker basket. She had brought Rapunzel a fresh pastry pie. "What is that frown, don't you want to make peace with your mom?" she said affectionately. The green eyes of the blonde girl didn't take long to change expression and with a leap she hugged her mother.

She devoured the cake. It was very good and also she hadn't lifelong eaten sweets. Grethel had taught her that they ruined the skin.

"I want to get you another gift" said the witch "how about going to see the lantern show?". "But it's not my birthday," Rapunzel observed. A magnificent lantern show had been taking place for all her birthdays as long as she could remember. In the royal city, hundreds and hundreds of lanterns were set free in the direction of the sky. Rapunzel might not have known, but it was a gift to her from her parents, aka the king and queen. From the day their daughter disappeared, kidnapped by Grethel, fifteen years ago, they had never lost hope of being able to hug her again, sooner or later. Wherever she was, maybe she would have admired that show and understood that her parents still thought of her and loved her.

Grethel did not let herself be caught unprepared for the objection. "This year there is a party to curry favor with the gods. You know it's times of famine," she lied. Rapunzel fell for it. She was almost crying for joy. It had always been her dream to get a closer look at the lanterns.

It was evening. Mother and daughter set off. The forest in the dark aroused great fear, thought the girl.

It had been about forty minutes when Grethel stopped. "Here we are". Rapunzel was perplexed. They were in the middle of the woods, where the dense foliage of the trees did not allow the slightest portion of the sky to be seen. "Here? But you can't see anything" the girl said. Grethel burst into a loud as well as malignant laugh. "How naive you are Rapunzel" ruled the witch. They stood at the foot of a huge oak tree. Judging by the size, it had to be several hundred years old. "There won't be any lanterns tonight. Something just as good will happen in compensation." 

Grethel closed her eyes and put her hands together almost as if in prayer. Then she solemnly pronounced the phrase "Otis Suptibus Arzis". Immediately the oak sprang to life and its branches began to flail. Some of these grabbed Rapunzel's wrists and ankles and lifted her into the air. "Mom! What's going on ?!" the girl asked, terrified. "Dear Rapunzel, I'm not your mother," Grethel said in the cruellest tone she was capable of. "Do you want to know your story? I'll tell you. Your real parents are the king and queen, two inept. When you were three you were kidnapped by a witch on a hot summer night. That witch of course was me." Rapunzel trembled all over hearing those words. "Your hair has a magical power that I have used all these years to keep myself young, but now I have finally found a way to take possession of your power, so that I no longer have a good for nothing like you around. You have no idea how much expensive was to keep you for these long fifteen years". Rapunzel was shocked. She felt hatred take over her psyche. In a way, those words hadn't completely surprised her. A small part of her had always believed that she couldn't be her mother. They were so different ... too much to think about.

Grethel picked up a branch of the oak and wrapped it around her wrist. "Do you know the spell of exchange? Of course not. It allows you to exchange the magical powers of two subjects. In this case this magical tree will hit you by giving you its power, in reaction you will give it yours. And then it will pass to me" .

"You are an unclean being!" Rapunzel exclaimed.

"Save your breath for your screams, it will hurt a lot."

The oak lit up. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH !!!" Rapunzel was screaming in pain. This time the witch hadn't lied.

"The process is quite slow, put your heart at peace"

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH! STOP IT, PLEASE!

Incredibly Grethel seemed to hear the girl's prayers. The exchange stopped instantly. Grethel collapsed to the ground. Blood gushed from her mouth. 

With the little strength she had she put her hands to her chest. She grabbed the arrow that had pierced her heart and tried to remove it. It was all in vain. A few moments later the witch was already dead.

Rapunzel opened her eyes. She saw Flynn's blurry figure in the distance. He was holding a bow. He approached his beloved still trapped. He cut the branches with a dagger and once released he took her in his arms. Then they kissed passionately. "Do you know you were sexy while screaming?". "You are such a depraved," Rapunzel joked.

A few weeks later the two got married and lived happily ever after as prince and princess.

 

 

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